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Change: IIt was a long flight home. We made it! I said," Well Welch isn't a total idiot. He probably set everything up outside of the
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Change: theto the air port. There, we saw a plane that is going to Spring Valley. These men were loading luggage. While they were not looking,
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Nov 23 2008, 2:01 PM EST
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Change: springSpring Valley. With you out of the way, he could do his plan. This is his plan: Mr. Welch became sick of Spring Valley. He
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Change: VallyValley school. All of the kids cheering my name, me giving them high fives, life was sweet!Then...BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! BEEP! Darn!! It was all a
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Change: IIt is a awesome place to live in!" Kita said," Because he's an old fart and wants everyone to suffer that's why!!" The plane took
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Change: guards. They fell asleep.As Timmy did that, me and Kita started to dig around the tower. Then Timmy joined in on the digging. Half way trough the digging, we found the scroll!!!! It said, "Welcome to part 5! Or shall I
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Change: 75 parts of the mission. Part one will start soon.Chapter six: Part One Begins!!!!The next day we began our journey. We knew that the tallest mountain in Japan is Mt.
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Change: dead. Timmy and Kita suddenly stopped fighting. I think they were thinking of their families.... I was a long flight home. We made it! I
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Change: China,Japan, and who know Japanese!! Wow!! Maybe he isn't such a bad teacher...... But I still hate him for giving me the F's I didn't even really get.Chapter Three: Spies or No Spies!!??'' What???!!!! That's impossible!! Where would you get
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Change: a thief. I slowly walked up to the man and took the scroll. Then, Timmy and Kita took a large sack, put it over the thieves! We carried the sack to the jail and left. We went back to the camp to read the next scroll. It said, ''
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Change: 57 parts of the mission. Part one will start soon.Chapter six: Part One Begins!!!!The next day we began our journey. We knew that the tallest mountain in Japan is Mt.
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Change: met spoke english. We started are walk through the pyramid. It was cold and dark. We had a a candle in our pack. We walked past other rooms that were covered on the bodies of people.the rest of chapterthis 9chapter will be here soon!!!!!!!!!! soon!!!!!!!!!!!
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Change: Along with the scroll, we got $5000! We were so happy to get some money. We were on the air plane for a day or
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Change: ''Welcome to part three of your mission. Now, you need to leave Japan, and go to Egypt to track down the group called the Jewl Theives. They are bad people who need to be stopped. One of them have the message that gets you to part four of chapteryour
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Change: We ran to her. I said, ''Kita!!! We thought you were gone forever!!!!! What happened???'' Kita said, '' I fell just a few yards into
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Change: Step one: We had to climb to the top of Japan's tallest mountain. Step two: When we get there, we have to look for the
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Change: My team got on the plane and we were on our way to Japan. We also received $3000 to spend on hotels and food. While
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Change: The funny part about today is, Kita fell asleep during the time when Welch as using numb-chucks! He swung it around his head 5 times
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Change: of school. He was acting really weird. Yesterday, he gave us a pop quiz on the history ofsingowof spying. Now today he is teaching us kung fu! What's up with this guy???
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